I think I've using a bit a "no-no" for panels lately, I'll have to stop that. Do you mean confusing as in the story, or that the paneling seemed weird?
the story, panel was fine to read, it's the story that's confusing you flip back and forth between evil and good without any prompting like ...elwhere or ...meanwhile..
Oh, the first panel explains where he is, he's right next to the good guys. I dunno if you noticed them in the corner or not.
But ur right, sometimes I show characters doing other things without any explination. I don't really like the whole "The Next Day" or "In a Building" aproaches because I feel it detracts from the story, and I do intend for it to link up eventually anyway. Thanks for reading though.
sheesh, everybody's all tense. "who's that guy?! why's he standing there?!" if you know the characters you know if they are evil or good.
a "meanwhile" is useless, it doesnt say anything; its unnecessary. obviously, anything in a panel is happening in a timeline, this isnt a comic about time travel...yet.
Someone is lurking...in a tree. Again.
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last page was clarifying, this one's just confusing
I think I've using a bit a "no-no" for panels lately, I'll have to stop that. Do you mean confusing as in the story, or that the paneling seemed weird?
actually, i thought this was one of your easiest-to-follow panels ever. so thats a funny contrasting opinion.
i dig it. heh, i guess eisle plays the bass now. thats awesome.
Heh, thanks man. Glad you like it, maybe it's just people's opinion then.
the story, panel was fine to read, it's the story that's confusing you flip back and forth between evil and good without any prompting like ...elwhere or ...meanwhile..
Oh, the first panel explains where he is, he's right next to the good guys. I dunno if you noticed them in the corner or not.
But ur right, sometimes I show characters doing other things without any explination. I don't really like the whole "The Next Day" or "In a Building" aproaches because I feel it detracts from the story, and I do intend for it to link up eventually anyway. Thanks for reading though.
Who's the guy that Eisle is saying he's knows he'd be proud. And why is Eisle goodish now.
Those are things which will be explained.
sheesh, everybody's all tense. "who's that guy?! why's he standing there?!" if you know the characters you know if they are evil or good.
a "meanwhile" is useless, it doesnt say anything; its unnecessary. obviously, anything in a panel is happening in a timeline, this isnt a comic about time travel...yet.
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